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creepypasta oc - graveless UPDATE by AK-47x creepypasta oc - graveless UPDATE by AK-47x
 

Real Name: Alexander Joseph Greathen III

Alias: Graveless

Meaning to alias: It's another Word for the “Black Plague" victims. They didn't bury the bodies so they had to burn them so, "Graveless".

Age: 20

D.O.B: April 1 

Birthplace: United Kingdom, London

Language(s):  English

Voice:  He has a quiet and soft voice, sounds like a young teenager. Is British in accent.

Current Residence: Lives in an apartment building that he is the owner of (He has an existent name Victor who acts as the landlord of the building for the public’s view more info about this will be added in the backstory)

Gender: Male but is taunted for being a small builded person

Species/Race: Mutated Human

Status: Alive 

Affiliation: He is affiliated with Parasite (My own character named Para Link)

 

Alliance

*Andy (My own character)

*Kal (juckern0t)

*Anesthesia (nadzarki)

*Parasite


Weapon(s):

Syringe/Needle:

He uses it to inject his own blood into his victim’s blood stream… 

His blood is very toxic to other people.

Scalpel:

Uses it to cut himself so he can put it directly onto the victim’s skin

Taser:

Long ranged self-defence weapon so he can flee


Method of Killing: Stalks his victims, knows their routines and finds a day when they are alone at their home   or not populated area. And will leave traps for them , by leaving some of his blood on something they use often or Break in inject them with a needle, needle is very thin that can’t barely feel it.

Goal/Reason to Kill: from being sick all the time, he can’t enjoy life to the fullest and is living a almost pointless life, when he sees people who are wasting there life’s , by showing their bodies and ignorant, it gets him so raged to the point of killing them. 

Hobbies:  

 Alex loves math and Science. That he often has books filled with equations and formulas,  another thing his really into is movies, he watches them frequently since he can’t get out lot from being sick all the time. That also means he likes video games and actually has shelves of games and movies.



Likes

He absolutely loves water, it one of the only things what washes off the black blood and for little while he can touch things with out getting blood on it. He likes food but sadly can’t eat it , only liquid-based foods since the Black Plague started as a stomach disease as his stomach is mostly in pain can’t handle solid foods.  Something else he likes to do on his down time is drawing and sketching, this gives him satisfaction in some ways , since he can’t touch anyone but view them from a far and drawing their details of faces/ body’s.

Dislikes:  

Alex hates when he doesn’t have his medicine on hand, the medicine only helps him deal with the pain little better. With out it he gets in so much pain that he’s bed ridden for most of the day. And is extremely annoyed and cranky from being in pain.  His skin is very delicate that it’s easy to bruise and cut and take long time to heal from being in a sickly State. So standing or walking for long distances hurts him little more. 

Doesn’t like animals a lot either, from them always being skittish around him (he got attacked by a dog before and hated it so much ) 


Fear(s): 

He is scared from being seen as  no longer  human but as some “thing”.   He tries hard to look human so he often takes showers so for little while he can look “ normal”


Personality

Playful but is also a more insightful and easy-going person. However, Alex is calmer and more mature at times. Apart from his hateful attitude, he becomes a pleasant person, acting in a selfless and serious manner; but when he is around people he’s not  familiar with, he reverts to being a scamp-like individual, He demonstrates an understanding about social interactions and innate self-control. He can be shy and very nervous  when it comes to new things . From his sickness he has to constantly be aware of what he does, often making him nervous on trying new things.


Summarized History:

Alexander is an orphan adopted by a rich but old fashioned couple, to why he also got his long name. As he grew up, he was homeschooled due to being sickly but is actually intelligent and creative. All of this stopped when "Parasite", a walking corpse of an evil creature massacred his family but spared him when the Century old creature transferred/mutated a disease he has got in his body from the 19th century, Black Plague, to the boy. Alex serves as his "son" to the corpse and remains untouchable due to the disease. Any human who has direct physical contact with him will immediately die. His self proclaimed father made him hold and from being killed by the disease. It was indeed a current, a lonely and depressing life for him. Though there is only one woman in the entire world he can only touch without killing and its Anesthesia, the Parasite's proxy.


Orientation: straight but could be asexual from the lack of interest in “sex” 


Friends

*Dav-Ink’s hoaxton 

* nadzarki's Anesthesia

*rag doll ( my character)

*loup noir ( my character) 


Rivals/Enemies:  

*Parasite ( my character)

*Cal (juckern0t)


APPEARANCE

Hair: Brown hair 

Skin: pale sickly colour 

Eyes: bluish Gray eyes 

Height: 5’5”

Weight: 90lbs

Body Type: small and slender build  

Other features:  has bruises all over his body and purple scarring like veins


PHYSICAL / MENTAL

Disorder(s): n/a

Abilities/Strengths: he is very intelligent in mathematics and has toxic blood 

Weaknesses/Faults:   He can be over powered easily from his small body, but this is little difficult with out touching him or getting blood on you 


STATS

(Rate from 1-10, 10 being the highest/best)

Intelligence: 10

Strength: 3

Speed: 5

Agility:  5

Endurance: 3

Stamina: 2

Balance: 6

Tolerance: 1 


 FACTS/TRIVIA

- he’s a whimp

- Can be a smart ass at times 

- He likes Cold medicine to drink at random, makes him drunk with out being pain 

- Has a assistant who helps him named Victor. Who does all the Business work for Alex since his appearance is uncanny to some.

-  He likes fish and owns a pet fish what he named Jeff 


[Ref Layout by nadzarki]

[Art, info, character owned originally by AK-47x]


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:iconsilviapisimiau:
SilviaPisiMiau Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the OC
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nadzarki Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2017  Student General Artist
AHH Alex chan <3
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kendrachrome Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He is adorable yet dangerous 6u6
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Dav-Ink Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Unique, interesting concept, and balanced creepypasta character
Well done bab :heart:
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FlowerVamine Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2017  Student Digital Artist
bless.
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Aidi-Wolf Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Can't wait to see it when it's done
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RiaSora27 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*gasp* NEW UPDATE! ( * O * )
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Lugia20711 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
He looks good!
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MegaNE-KO Featured By Owner Edited Jan 25, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Is it just me or did his hair got shorter?
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017
I cut his hair lol 
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MegaNE-KO Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice.
A refreshing look. And wowwwws, it's been a while since I saw CP ocs, it's been quiet lately since more and more people are leaving the fandom. It's good to see there are still some of us left.
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Lofi-Senpai Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
May I use him in my comic also?
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MegaNE-KO Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Nicely done. He looks really awesome.
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W--rachet554 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay. This is interesting 

I like the over all story and how it came out and the ending ,but some parts were a bit bumpy I have to admit

I know you made up the mutation and all but you should have  hinted that his family suffering a death due to the disease and it's laying dormant in the gave

And realistic with a disease like that I don't think they would risk letting  him go back home

And am confused in the first description you say he's slow and weak andnear the end he's faster?idk 

And with a viruses this deadly...he should be kind a deadish...unless the mutation liv so inside him and it's like marriage "Till death do we part"

And how did he get out da house...?

As for the info you put for him I admire all the effort you put into it but remember you only need to put in info that the readers need to know.


 one heck of a creep though 
I just wish and keep saying this when I review a pasta OC
"Creepypastas are bad guys and you don't want to route for the bad guy or feel a sense or injustice"

If he feel in the already dug whole on his own that would be a different story.

Again though the originality. Is to real with this pasta and the fact that you used a real threat to mankind just puts the cheery on top

And this is my personal opinion the name could be a bit better you don't have to change it though


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AK-47x Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016
Oh well yeah I know that the story isn't the best it could be that's why I just put more of a shorter  Version out there  so I won't be tell people what and how he got into this, I probably should of say more but I had  written this at maybe 2-5am in the morning , highly that there's gonna be some errors what I didn't notice from the  lack of sleep so don't take most of this stuff as real because it is only the half , I'm even gonna be changing some of this 

I do know I'm gonna need to add in details of what I already got, 
but I'll just try to  answer some of your question 
-the death in the family was not  recent , it probably happen when he was little so it would of really matter to him 
- when I was  writing this I had thought of more of around the lines of ' he is dieing so it would be best for him to  to spend  the last  moments with his family' but sadly I was half wake so I  rushed it ;A; 
- MBD ( whatever I called ) is more like it needs a host to live , so he is sick half the time , it wouldn't really take him 'deadish' being sick him might was well be , he has black spots on his body as well , but yeah more host thing
- look I'm gonna be honest you.... what house lol (  think you mean the house he was staying , he just kinda got way but he had money on his side as well there is more info about that too >~> but to make it short , he got a house  built  off in the woods and he is staying there ehhh)
- I just wanted to make sure that I didn't miss anything to just put lot, plus I used a base ref on what I sure fill it and it say to use this 
-I can't do creepy ewe" can't but I wanted to have real emotions, that he knows what he's doing and he knows it bad but his head so messed  up that he's doesn't know anymore , I like to have my characters have  personality stuff but I guess I was going to be like ' he does not have want this '

i guess thanks ? I don't know what else to call him but I just use his real name half the time so it's more of a nick name what doesn't really matter 

over all I would like that others won't 'review' my pastas because sometimes they are not  completed or not see to be the best as they could be, it's like review a  A piece of art what is only half  finished , I'm not really taking it seriously, he's just a fun character





All he was a doodle in science class ... Learning about the Black Death lol so I just one and one together hehe 
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W--rachet554 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the response and really appreciate answering my questions.

And I  knew you pasta was not done but someone set me a link to this off site and told me to review it either way.I read it twice and could not decided weather too or not...and I did anyway and glad I did your a great example of what it should be


But hey I've only been doing this for 3 months  and people send me links to stories OC's refs to review it.but I don't get much requests for DA 

And you should make it known that this piece is a work in progress because it fooled me after all.

Again thanks for being professional about it.  .w.  
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016
Your welcome ^^ 

oh? Someone had link you this? Eh now that's bit concerning for me , I think I'm gonna need to what a disclaimer on my characters now, anyway what do you mean by 'great example?' 

Ahhh  I see, in some ways it is done, it's more that short story I have for him , needs to be fixed in few spots , in some ways you help me see what I should fix with the story, 

if you like , when I get this fixed up I could relink it to you again ?



I actually been drawing creepypasta for only 4-5 months ewe 
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W--rachet554 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I guess it is cause for concern,but the link lead me to a folder in one of the creepy pasta groups and your creep was in there but do as you will.

And by good example I mean I've never seen a pasta like this one,Its so unique .

I acctually looked up the dark plague after reading this and yikes and I looked deeper and found a fun fun fact,people who were infected were refered to as "The Graveless" because no one would risk touching them to put them in a ground.

Not sure if I helped that much I just told you what I think so techniqly not a review more like personal oppinion cause I never shared this.And acctually I think it was not fare of me cause this pasta is here for fun.But if your willing to go further with it i'll support this walking viruse and see how he turns out (not like my oppinion matters though)

Good luck and i'll watch its progress. this is interesting   

(totally not stalking him)
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PinkCamoQueen Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I find it amusing how I complain about there being no unique Creepypastas, but then I trip over an amazing lil' noodle like him. I quite like him. Good job. ^-^
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number1emo Featured By Owner May 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I admire the work for him! I like the idea you had for the plague , genius ! the funny thing was that i had almost the exact same idea on a character oc i was working on...all well, i better get back to the drawing board for a new original idea!
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proxyskull666 Featured By Owner May 3, 2016  Student Artist
WOW!! HE LOOKS SO COOL!! I JUST ADDED YOU TO MY WATCH!! AND TO MY FAVORITES!! AND ALSO I LIKED THE WAY HE KILLS THEM!! ITS SO COOL!! MORE KILLS!! MORE KILLS!! YAY!! YAY!!
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SgtKantusFear Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Student Artist
nice oc can i draw as chibi head
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016
Go head ^^ just tag me as the creator ;u;
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SgtKantusFear Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016  Student Artist
Did u like the chibi head of this guy i Did
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016
Yeah it's was cool , I never really get fan art? ;3;
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SgtKantusFear Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016  Student Artist
Really aawww come n get a hug
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016
I don't feel like being touch by a human right now XD jk 
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SgtKantusFear Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016  Student Artist
Actually im a dark dragon god
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016
...WELL ! i am the definition of life and death, i have seen many things , made things what shall not be named what is hell for many but not for all. to be talking to someone as i? is each a thing to be called dream, unknowing if the reality of seeing but to only be woked by a voice familiar. is how to be heard by some one like me, to be call a god is a understatement, is a word made by man and takes atfer man , dark and light can not be with out each other, to say... to be, only the words of man  dark dragon god, is to say you , yourself is nothing more then a word of man..so i do say i have no name, to only say i am  definition of all 

or 
im just someone whos just has free time  hehehe
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SgtKantusFear Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Student Artist
of course i will thank u so much i just wish i wanna hug u for real
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MiCKKeH Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What a cool character! 8I <3 I JUST missed his birthday too TAT ugh! I really love his design and concept dear ;D <33 he seems like he'd be so awesome to draw as well c; <3 Great work!! <3
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2016
Ahhhhhhhhh! Thank youuu ^w^ all he did for his birthday was 'fool' around ewe it means lot to hear this uwu
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MiCKKeH Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're so welcome!! ;D <33 LOL Nawh how cute eue I'm sure it was a blast for him XDD no prob hunn!! ;A;
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BR0KEN-ANGELZ Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
He's honestly my number one favorite cp oc :D
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2016
Oh thank you! ^^ feels good to know that people are liking him 
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BR0KEN-ANGELZ Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!! He's really amazing!
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BloodyMangle Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2016
OHHHHHHH, I like the Black Death, so I like this charecter
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2016
Oh thank you ^^ 
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Aliceolantern Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I really do like him. Plus he's cute...... and i like crazy. 
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MegaNE-KO Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh mah gerd this is another cool character!
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016
What makes him a cool character in your eyes .3.
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MegaNE-KO Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Well the black liquids are not just for show, like seriously I've seen a lot of characters who bleed like that but most of them are just like tears or designs that can easily wipe off. Your character is quite different and I like that difference.
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016
yeah its really over used =w=  has long as i been in the fandom, i seen a running theme with in the characters of the creepypasta, being too over from the mean "pastas" like they take things from them and try to make a character out of it and most of the time ,, they fail and the ones who dont look like anything like the main , they come off looking like characters then "creepypasta ocs". sooooooo with this character " alex/ plague" i was trying to have the middle of the two and i dont if i did or if i have,

i would like to hear what others over think of him u.u  and what i should do with him ...



he was just a doodle XD
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MegaNE-KO Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You did great.
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ArtisticSlaughter Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ebony: I love this he needs a hug! But I won't do anything he's uncomfortable with!! ^^
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016
Alex:...I don't need a hug...
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ArtisticSlaughter Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ebony: *pokes his face* then youdeserve a poke
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2016
Alex:....i been touch ._.
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ArtisticSlaughter Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ebony: I usually tackle people so consider yourself lucky!
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2016
Alex:..... ._. Thank you 
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